I really enjoy doing songs about stories that themselves are already made up. I think I may revisit this later to harden the story delivery, but I loved the "boats of Argorn" as an expression and story when it just appeared (like song ideas tend to do), so I got through what I could with it.
I think the accompanying music is cool and has broad potential to expand on, but, in general, I just really like the feel of this one. I intended to use falsetto on the second line of each verse, but I ultimately decided against it. Otherwise, used a couple of unusual (at least unusual-for-me) devices (mid-phrase rhymes, non-rhymes, the fake story story, elongated short sentences with longer ramblings), so it's always feels at least original when you can put things like that together.
Let me know if you agree/disagree, but I realize not many people are still listening this deep into FAWM. :)